Wednesday, January 12, 2011
AND SO IT BEGINS . . .
Well . . . I am done dragging my feet (actually, I WAS busy through the holidays and then undecorating my home and getting everything clean and put back together, so I wasn't JUST dragging my feet, but I kind of was . . . a little) . . .
LOL . . . uh oh . . .
I know THAT made no sense, which bodes ill for a writer, you know?
BUT . . . I finally printed out a copy of the story I wrote last November for NaNoWriMo and have begun reading it from beginning to end (for the very first time) . . . making little notes (like 'this need more development' or 'show, don't tell') and some minor rewording and revising . . .
I am about two thirds of the way through it, and honestly (is this terrible to say?) I am actually kind of pleasantly surprised . . . I mean, I WROTE it, so of course there are no surprises in the storyline . . . but I AM kind of pleased, overall, with my efforts. I mean, there are parts that DO flow well, and it DOES hang together as a story . . .
It isn't an IMPORTANT story . . . no vampires or aliens or shape shifters or fairies . . . It isn't about anything really BIG . . . It is just a quiet little slice-of-life story . . . about growing up . . . and changing family dynamics . . . the ebb and flow of friendships . . . coming to terms with changes . . . It isn't very EXCITING . . . but I wasn't trying to write an exciting story . . . I wanted it to be quiet and simple and to feel . . . hmmmm . . . authentic, I guess . . .
And I kind of, sort of thinks parts of it DO . . .
I think that just maybe it is worth continuing to work on and revise and polish . . .
So . . .
I will! =o)
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You are farther along editing than me! :O :) Glad you are getting back into the swing of things with the new year though. I still want to read it some day (whenever you are ready to share it).
ReplyDeleteBest of luck as you work on the second draft!
Oh Tiff . . . YOUR book is SO much more complex and multilayered than this one is . . . The two simply don't compare . . .
ReplyDeleteI am willing to share . . . This primary editing to fix some things I already know need fixing (tweaking things so a minor secondary thread doesn't take over the story, etc) shouldn't take too long . . . but I know that you are BUSY and in school . . . I would appreciate your input, but don't want you to feel obligated to put your writing/editing aside OR your school work . . .
But if when you get a chance to look it over, if you see things that stand out as needing to be changed (or you think adding something would enhance it, etc) I would appreciate your thoughts . . .
Thanks for your interest!
dang, it's not like one of those important stories about vampires?!?
ReplyDeleteTee hee, sorry... that line just made me laugh -- how in the world are vampire stories considered important?! Seriously... I can't wait to read it!
Are you going to send it for us to read this year? :D...just sayin'!
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